2021-2022 浙江高考英语应用文— 感谢信
感谢信是浙江英语高考应用文中频繁出现的主题。由于为感谢信，即对已经发生的事表达感激之情。所以时态为一般过去式，也要求学生对如何叙事做出了一定的要求。
1.文章主要为三段式； 2.每段的具体内容、细节； 3.注意用词恰当，避免重复。
我们具体来看例题：
（浙江省重点高中联盟 2019 届高三联考）
假定你是李华。在你全家外出度假时, 你的英国朋友 Tim 把你的宠物狗 Bark 照顾得很好, 请你给他写一封电子邮件表示感谢, 并承诺送他一只刚出生的小狗(puppy) 。内容包括:
1. 表达感谢; 2. 赠送礼物。
注意:
1. 词数 80 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
讲解：
遇到这样的书信，主要以三段式，具体情况为第一段主要开门见山说明写信的目的；第二段叙述 Tim 的付出，在度假期间照顾了小狗。为了突出 Tim 的付出，可以通过小狗的变化来侧面感激。在此，赠送礼物作为回报；第三段再次表达感激、希望喜欢礼物等。
第一段：可以用适当地从句进行表达感激之情。如，I’m writing to express my sincere/heartfelt gratitude/appreciation for the kindness you have shown while taking care of my pet dog Bark.（亮点：定语从句、省略，以及高级词汇“heartfelt”，“gratitude/appreciation”等）
第二段：讲述照顾小狗，以及小狗的变化，可以说小狗更可爱了。如，It turned out Bark was given thorough consideration, which, without doubt, made Bark chubby and even more lovely. （亮点：定语从句、主语从句、被动语态，以及高级词汇“thorough”，“consideration”，“chubby”等）
第三段：再次感谢，这边用简单词汇及句型即可。
参考范文（98 字）
Dear Tim,
I’m writing to express my sincere appreciation for the kindness you have shown while taking care of my pet dog Bark. With your help, I needn’t worry about whether Bark would be looked after well when on vacation. Of course, it turned out Bark was given thorough consideration,
which, without doubt, made Bark chubby and even more lovely. I know you like dogs very much. After thinking twice, nothing is better than presenting a puppy as a gift in order to reciprocate your favor. Thank you again for your attending to Bark. Hope you will like the puppy.
Yours,
Li Hua 写此类信件要点总结：
1.仔细审题，需要把题目中要点简单陈述； 2.三段式书写，第二段往往是关键部分； 3.句子结构不要重复，要有多样性； 4.注意字数，不要过多； 5.正式考试中要注意书写，建议字体清晰、间距相同； 6.信件类必须有 Dear**，和落款 Yours，**
课堂练习一 （2019 年 年 6 月普通高等学校招生全国统一考试浙江卷）
假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友 Alex 即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括: 1. 表示感谢; 2. 回顾 Alex 对你的帮助; 3. 临别祝愿。
注意: 1. 词数 80 左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Alex, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
提示：本文为一封感谢信，写作的主要内容包括三段：1.开门见山，表达写信目的，表示感激，单也要适当加上题中细节（Alex 要回国）；2.回顾 Alex 的帮助，这边可以涉及三小点（具体的一天或半天的帮助；分享学习经历；在所帮助的方面取得的成绩来肯定 Alex 的付出）
参考范文：
Dear Alex,
Hearing that you will return to your country soon, I feel a bit upset. But meanwhile, I want to extend my sincere gratitude for your kind help with my English learning. I still remember what you have devoted to improving my oral English and English writing. Besides, you also frankly shared your learning experience with me, which encouraged me a lot. Additionally, I would not have been a top student in English and would not have won the English speaking Speech Contest. All in all, words fail to express my appreciation to you. I do hope that you will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever.
Yours,
Li Hua
课堂练习二（金丽衢十二小 2019 学年高三第一次联考）
假定你是李华，暑期在英国旅游时得到当地导游 Mr. Smith 的悉心照顾,回国后给他写一封邮件表达谢意。主要内容：
1.回忆旅行中美好时光;
2.遇到的困难和帮助； 3.邀请他来中国旅游。
注意：
1）词数 100 左右； 2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Smith, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
提示：本文为感谢信，感谢导游 Mr. Smith 的悉心照顾。文章以三段式进行写作：1.开门见山，表达写信目的，表示感激；2.具体的内容，也是作文的 body 部分，需要详细说明帮助的内容。如，详细介绍、旅行途中丢失东西、帮助寻找等环节；3.再次感谢，并表示欢迎。
参考范文：
Dear Mr. Smith, I’m writing to convey my heartfelt gratitude for your help while I was travelling in England during the summer vacation. It is your detailed and humorous introduction that enables me to have a deeper insight into British customs and have a wonderful time there. I am also deeply impressed by your sincere help to get me some medicine when I caught a cold and your perfect advice on choosing gifts for my family. Thanks again for all your efforts! I do hope someday you’ll come to China and let me show you around my hometown.
Yours,
Li Hua
课堂练习三（ 浙江高考预测模拟卷 ）
假如你是李华，目前在美国你校的友好学校 Wilson High School 学习交流，将于下周一回国。请通过电子邮件给该校长 Mr. Smith 写一封感谢信。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Smith, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
提示：本文为感谢信，具体内容。分三段式：1.开门见山，写信目的。这个部分要注意涉及一下自我介绍及即将回国内容；2.具体感谢内容，可以包括生活上的食宿安排、校园中的课程安排以及收获；3.再次感谢，并表达期盼。
参考范文：
Dear Smith, How time flies! I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China visiting your school now. I’ve been here for several weeks and will be back home next Monday. I’m writing to extend my sincere appreciation to you. During my stay, I’ve learnt so much about your school. To my amazement, your school possesses great learning resources and excellent teachers. Thanks to your proper arrangements, I attended many classes of different subjects, learning much knowledge. Meanwhile, I established good relationship with some students in your school and got to know your culture. I sincerely hope they can visit my school one day. Thanks again for your help and support. Welcome to China.
Yours,
Li Hua
课后练习：
假如你是李华，目前在美国的 Houston 中学学习交流，下个月学业结束即将回国。请你写一篇发言稿在班里做一个简单的演讲，要点如下：
1.表示感谢； 2.你的收获； 3.你的期望。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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注意：本文与课堂练习相似，但文体上有点区别。文本为演讲稿，所以不需要“Dear** ”和“Yours ，** ”。如果考试出现“Dear** ”和“Yours ，** ”，则会扣2 分格式分。
参考范文：
Good morning everyone,
I’m delighted to make a speech before I go back to China next month. I really want to express my sincere gratitude for your generous help as well as the great kindness! During the short time, not only have I enhanced my English, but also I have learnt about abundant knowledge about cross-culture. I’m blessed with the chance to study further here with you, which is a memorable time in my life! Besides, you are welcome to China to experience rich Chinese culture and I’ll be the guide. That’s all, thank you!